Sacrifice Vidiow

This wast the first outcome of our vidiow that we showed on friday 26th november 2010 to both the fashion and graphics groops. After viewing the vidiow we got some constructed critisim of how to impruve and correct the vidiow which, was to remove all the text because it dident need any text to explain. Aswell as to include more things that the fashion students do like sowing stiches and fitting dresses. There was a few errors in the edit itself like the overlay going on too long, and a few blanc spaces where they shudent be.